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CIjeli hebeni dan pada ova prokleta kiša 

Eh I da pitam ko je ono htio da pročita moju pjesmu? ;o

Mislim da roosewelt i linkosaan daj baci neku da ti se divimo tvome umjetničkom geniju.Rado bih i čuo tj. pročitao.

Zahvaljujem :p

I evo pjesme,što sam jučer napisao u školi :p

[Rap:]
[Verse 1:]

Mentally demented in my brain,
the pain won't stop, I’m tortured by everything,

blast me it's going to flash,
put everything away and just smash,
I'm dopest on rap,but I could never focus on that
Was too distract, from all the pain people caused
When my heart was broken..fuck it's still broken,
I cannot think clearly anymore, from all the shit that's been caused,
I prayed, every day, for this pain to get away,
for things to get better, but they never got better,
they only became worse and the pain never left,
feeling like I'm trapped inside animal's brain,
trying to disguise my pain, with fake smiles,
I never could handle the pain
Fighting the dark thoughts in my brain,
never could handle the hate,
I'm only damaging myself,
unable to even scream, so I'm asking myself

[Sing:]
[Chorus:]

What is this life for..
it's full of pain, hate,
I don't know..
if we really can call this life..
Asking myself...
Should I live or DIE

[Rap:]
[Verse 2:]

I'm just a wreck with emotional feelings of pain,
The acid rain that drips on my soul,
is leaving scars and pain,
memories that I've been trying to forget,
Trying from the start to keep my heart together,
in this darkness, in this pain, I can't breath anymore,
So I'm asking myself, what’s this life going to,
From the early start, my life is a maze,
hiding my heart in it, I can't feel the haze,
its amazing what my heart has to give,
I know I'll have to live, half the life is trying to win,
I have to beat this pain, this hate,
these dark thoughts that are rapidly going through my mind,
I can't give up, this is just the beginning,
my heart, hidden inside this maze of hatred,
mind, filled with hate, filled with pain,
filled with past, and the mistakes I made
wondering if I'll ever be able to shout my name, whilst asking

[Sing:]
[Chorus:]

What is this life for..
it's full of pain, hate,
I don't know..
if we really can call this life..
Asking myself...
Should I live or DIE

[Rap:]
[Verse 3:]

Erasing all the dark memories of the past,
trying to find someone who can complete me, without becoming my enemy,
someone who can give me back hope, will and strength,
thought I found that someone, but I guess I was wrong, like always,
I don't think she really cares, but she's the reason I live,
she's the reason why I am trying to keep on going,
trying to keep on marching, trying to keep on developing future,
writing stories, writing songs about her,
writing about myself, writing about life,
writing till my hands start to hurt and shake,
till I get a headache, till I collapse,
thinking it's all worth it,
but it never was worth it, it’s still the same,
it was all nothing, nothing seemed to work straight,
Everything is still a failure
so I stab myself, still trying to get rid of the dark thoughts,
and demons in my mind, still unable to shout,
and still asking myself..

[Sing:]
[Chorus:]

What is this life for..
it's full of pain, hate,
I don't know..
if we really can call this life..
Asking myself...
Should I live or DIE

(Da kažem nisam depresivan,niti tužan ni išta tako,jednostavno sam imao perfekrtnu inspiraciju da napišem ovako nešto :D)

Evo mene, malo se vježbala matiša, matura je sve bliže, i neka je...

Više mi je pun ku*ac i nje i svega toga.

Ajd ne budali kiša nikad nije glupa, več su ljudi glupi po kojima kiša pada ak se ubrajaju pod glupe tak to ide fučkaj ga sad.

rambox kaže...

Ajd ne budali kiša nikad nije glupa, več su ljudi glupi po kojima kiša pada ak se ubrajaju pod glupe tak to ide fučkaj ga sad.

Ajd opali koju rafal....

  Da faq did I just read?

Nije ti kod nas u dalmaciji baš tako.

Ma stvar ti je u tome da prošle godine nisam montirao jer su govorili kako će kiša sad pa sutra pa tako u nedogled,al ove godine sam stavio pa odlučio ako bude kiša super,aako ne onda su cijevi tu .

Sad i ne skidam lipo palo 2 metra sniga po njima hihi.

Znam, ali nekad vrijeme nekad ne pogodi cijelo mjesto a recimo u daljinu 50kn pada kiša a kod tebe ne. Ovisi kako cirkulira vrijeme. Hehe

Narode idem ja čitamo se....

Pusti ti to znam ih dosta koji pišu na engleskom i priznajem da ljepše i bolje zvuči.Iako ako ovakva amerikanizacija naše djece nastavi bojim se da će se morati organizirati novi Narodni preporod da se ljude pouči ljepoti hrvatskog jezika.

@Aliser lijepo i poetično.Ali videći kakav stil voliš pročitaj si malo Baudelaira,Rimbauda,Tin Ujevića(Hrvatski Baudelaire) i Matoša(Utjeha kose obavezno) možda nađeš još koju inspiraciju.

@Ikarus01 Hvala na sugestij :D I drago mi je da ti se sviđa

@donator_bubrega tu smo,samo sam ja malko zauzet oko škole,okanio se pjesama na trenutak :D